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My heart cries out as I see the past fly,

It passes my eyes so I cry.


I see the person I used to be,

My tears flow down like the sea.


I learn after all that life is rough,

It links me to its pole like a cuff.


My eyes watch in sadness as another falls,

the painting of rejection up on the walls.


My little girl sits there and cries,

so I feel angered that I hope another dies.


But then I see a shadow of what I was,

my heart breaks is what it does.


Please be okay, do not let them see,

what I cannot bear you to be.


Your happiness is what I wish now,

but I ask how.


How can I make you smile?

How can I make things worthwhile?


People will come and comment,

but please forget.


You are worth so much more,

right down to the core.


So my little angel do not give up,

I will put back together your cup.


The broken pieces will stick like glue,

because I truly love you.
:iconinsaneblondemidget14:

Author's Comments

This is a gift I made for my daughter there were some people who were harassing her and saying that her art is not good. Well I say otherwise.

Anyways...I hope she feels better. The poem has deeper meaning to it. You can ask about it if you'd like but I won't explain it now. I just ask that nobody degrade anyone because I know personally that it is not the funest experience.

<3

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:iconprincessrinoa:
Lovely hit me right in my heart. Thank you for doing this for her Im sure it'll make her more happy! ^^

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Because of me
Your world has crumbled
I can't be ignored
Because of me
Your fallacy is history
And I will stand alone
Yes I will stand alone

~Avatar by sirenlovesyou ~
:iconinsaneblondemidget14:
o.o it hit you in the heart? oh my ^__^ I did it for her because I care about her too.

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=Jaz-is-rad and*insaneblondemidget14 4evuh x3
Yaoi isn't about two boys making passionate love in a dark corridor, no it's so much more than that, but I'll tell you after I finish watching
:iconprincessrinoa:
Yeah it just so touching. *_*

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Because of me
Your world has crumbled
I can't be ignored
Because of me
Your fallacy is history
And I will stand alone
Yes I will stand alone

~Avatar by sirenlovesyou ~
:iconinsaneblondemidget14:
I'm glad ^__^ I had hoped it would since I know what she feels

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=Jaz-is-rad and*insaneblondemidget14 4evuh x3
Yaoi isn't about two boys making passionate love in a dark corridor, no it's so much more than that, but I'll tell you after I finish watching
:icontherik:
The sentiment is definitely touching. I like that :)
:iconinsaneblondemidget14:
Wow...thank you very much ^_^

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=Jaz-is-rad and*insaneblondemidget14 4evuh x3
Yaoi isn't about two boys making passionate love in a dark corridor, no it's so much more than that, but I'll tell you after I finish watching
:iconsapphireangelis:
Omg...Mom...I'm gonna cry...Thats so touching..>///<
:iconinsaneblondemidget14:
o.o no....don't cry ^^; that wasn't the intent my love <3

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=Jaz-is-rad and*insaneblondemidget14 4evuh x3
Yaoi isn't about two boys making passionate love in a dark corridor, no it's so much more than that, but I'll tell you after I finish watching
:iconhentaiko:

omgosh lelena<3 That was truly a wounderful poem u worte for sis ;w; it almost made me cry!! Such great use of ur words, everything rhyme perfectly!!! ur sooo sweet of making her this, it really shows the love<3
I hope the little sweet-heart gets better*hug*<3

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